Saturday, January 8, 2011

My College Essay

I have just finished sending in college applications and I am eagerly awaiting notification from a few schools. I wrote my college essay on my experience in South Africa at SANCCOB and how a few memorable moments working with penguins helped me to discover my true passions and plans for the future. I also attached the link to this blog if any colleges were interested in seeing a bit more of what I am passionate about. Here is the final draft of my essay:


It’s All in the Moments
By Whitney Vos

The smell hit me before anything else. The dry heat of the car quickly escaped as I pushed open the door and reluctantly stepped outside, pulling my scarf tighter around my neck and cradling my coffee for warmth. I took one last sip in hope of storing the heat in my stomach and watched the wind blow my once visible breath away. I handed the thermos to my dad as we stood leaning against the car, staring at the building ahead of us.
I suddenly felt that first-day-of-school rush and gave my dad a nervous look. I prepared myself for an encouraging pep talk as he patted my hair and gave me a quick peck on the forehead before practically dragging me toward the gate, saying, quite unsympathetically, “Wow this place smells like poop! Is this really what you want to do with your summer?”
            It was, and after six weeks of working at SANCCOB, a rescue and rehabilitation organization for South Africa’s African penguins and ocean birds, I barely noticed the smell. Or if I did, it didn’t matter. Those were the most memorable 6 weeks of my life.
On my first day, I was assigned to the ICU where I learned to clean and gut fish. By the next day I was creating charts and learning the names and uses of medication. Within a week I was accustomed to the small white room where I would spend most of my summer vacation surrounded by crates of critically ill animals. In the ICU, I felt as though I learned more in the first few days than I had in my last 3 years at Arlington High. Unlike school, it wasn’t about memorizing dates or equations. Because these helpless animals depended on me to learn quickly, I did so by obsessively watching and imitating those around me.
Usually volunteers are given a variety of jobs, with the schedule changing daily so each person can spend time in all of the pens during their stay. Typically the morning would begin by checking the schedule and changing into boots and oilskins. For me, things were a bit different; I was assigned to ICU and animal admissions for nearly the entire six weeks of my stay. I dreaded my morning rounds because while my friends were preparing fish together, I started each morning by checking the birds’ crates to see if each one was still alive. Throughout the rest of the day I worked inside my own bubble of slow and careful tasks; like an ICU nurse at a hospital, I had to learn to be extremely careful and patient with every task and follow a strict and tedious schedule for each animal. When a new bird arrived, ICU became its first home, which meant dropping everything to help to stabilize our new patient.
Breaks took place at designated times, but mine depended on the birds which meant I’d often miss them or have to make my own without the company of my new friends. Most of the time I didn’t mind because I cared about the birds, but as the intensity of this experience grew, it became emotionally draining not to have the company of the other volunteers.
One morning I sat under a heat lamp and held a cormorant in my hands. For an hour I tried to get the bird’s body temperature to rise and hoped that my undivided attention would keep it alive. I still don’t know how long I cradled the bird after it died in my arms. I remember sitting in the kitchen and crying with a supervisor who made me a cup of tea. I told her that I wasn’t cut out for ICU work because I was too sensitive. That’s exactly why they kept putting me there, she told me, because while it might be harder for me than for the others, the birds sick enough to be there need a person who cares deeply about them. So I stayed in ICU day after day and though death came with sad regularity, I eventually found my emotions easier to manage. I realized that with sadness also comes joy and through it all I also experienced exhilarating, heart-lifting moments, and in these I discovered insights that no other experience has given me.
It was a beautiful afternoon in Cape Town and some of the ICU birds were spending the day outside. I sat on a small stool with a baby penguin between my knees and a syringe of formula under my arm. The sun warmed my back and a mist of water blew across my face from a pool being cleaned nearby. I leaned over this small ball of gray fuzz and opened its beak with one of my gloved hands while using the other to prepare the syringe. My face was inches from the baby’s mouth as I watched for the air hole and inserted the tube into the throat and down to the stomach. I kept my face close, as these birds don’t easily keep down their food, and I began squeezing the syringe. Suddenly I felt the warm, fishy breath of the baby African penguin on my face and this triggered in me a sensation that I will never forget. Although penguin # 204 was one of hundreds I medicated and fed by tube during my stay, this moment of connection—this penguin and me—which lasted for maybe 30 seconds before I had to move to the next bird, had a dramatic and enduring influence.
Though I was face-to-face with a baby penguin, this moment really brought me face-to-face with myself in a way I’d never been before. Who would have thought that my best summer vacation would be spent cleaning up after oily birds? Never have I laughed as hard as I did with my new friends when we gutted fish in the kitchen. I felt best about myself when I was in big green oilskins and yellow rain boots with my hair wet and hanging in my face while knee deep in stinky guano.
Through this volunteer trip to South Africa I discovered who I am. Because my dad lives there, I’ve traveled to Cape Town more times than I can count, but now a single moment stands out as I think about this destination. Forever I will remember a few insignificant seconds of realization. Because finding out the person I am—a girl who loves the smell of baby penguin breath in her face—reminds me that I am also a young woman who has a lifetime ahead of her to find ways to make other lives better.

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